Treasure

I'm feeling too lazy right now to update my webpage, so for now I'll just cut and paste it here...this chapter is a bit longer than the others, though still not much is going on. I think things will start to pick up in the next part.

I swore I'd work on a story a day this week, so maybe by Friday I'll feel some more chapters are ready for viewing (I tend to finish, then ignore, then edit, then ignore, then edit. That's why they take me so long)

( Chapter Two )

Anyway, hope you enjoy. lemme know if there are any real flaws or holes or whatnot, this story is good for those.