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testing, testing
Sep. 26th, 2003 11:57 pmalright guinea pigs, I need your help. I have no idea of the quality of this story, so I'd appreciate some input before I turn anymore of my hairs gray. I'm hoping to post it on my site on the 13th, but it needs extensive work. I'm just so cross-eyed looking at it, I can' see the plot holes and such that I'm sure are there.
The prologue is already up on my site, this is the first...part I guess. It's arranged oddly, which is this first chunk is 26 pages. So - if you read it and like it, let me know. If you get halfway through and think it sucks, let me know. If you get 5 pages into and decide it's not worth the trouble, let me know. My feelings won't be hurt, believe me.
( Unequal Children, Book One, Part One: A Valentine )
P.S. Don't look for any deep or even shallow meaning w/the poetry - I think it add a nice touch, but it's more for fun and all (as well as the titles for each section) rather than real relevance. As![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
abiona_sashenka will tell you, poetry and I are old enemies.
The prologue is already up on my site, this is the first...part I guess. It's arranged oddly, which is this first chunk is 26 pages. So - if you read it and like it, let me know. If you get halfway through and think it sucks, let me know. If you get 5 pages into and decide it's not worth the trouble, let me know. My feelings won't be hurt, believe me.
( Unequal Children, Book One, Part One: A Valentine )
P.S. Don't look for any deep or even shallow meaning w/the poetry - I think it add a nice touch, but it's more for fun and all (as well as the titles for each section) rather than real relevance. As
abiona_sashenka will tell you, poetry and I are old enemies.
