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maderrReveiw for Geniuses on ff.net (which, really, explains it all):
Make the prologue C&H-ish, will ya? That's not true to FoxTrot at all, either. I mean come on! Even people are so desperate to meet other people that Jason would never mistake Calvin for a telemarketer, and even if he did, he'd say 'Hi'. Come on, think about what you're writing before you write it and post it on a public site!
And, just because I always give people the benefit of the doubt, I checked his stuff out. Yeah, um, no room to talk.
Make the prologue C&H-ish, will ya? That's not true to FoxTrot at all, either. I mean come on! Even people are so desperate to meet other people that Jason would never mistake Calvin for a telemarketer, and even if he did, he'd say 'Hi'. Come on, think about what you're writing before you write it and post it on a public site!
And, just because I always give people the benefit of the doubt, I checked his stuff out. Yeah, um, no room to talk.
