surprised by the sound he felt for sure hew as imagining it.
he was, not hew as ;)
... o.o Woah, hello mermaid plot points...
but he definitely see there was something in the clouds.
could definitely see or definitely saw
Ivan nodded, barely hearing as his men began to talk.. He looked at Shio and Shinju
Double periods
“Why did I have to wind up with a lover who’s so obviously important?” Ivan sighed
AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! ^.^ Poor Ivan.
The same thing that had happened before, backing in the inn.
backing = back
Shinju and Shio laughed, the sound cold and chilling, as they were dragged away. When a guard moved to backhand them into silence, he faltered and finally lowered his hand. The sisters’ laughter ceased only when they were well away from Zholty’s office.
*.* Those two are So. Freaking. Cool. *.*
Perhaps with the prophecy fulfilled, Pozhar will being to move out of
being = begin
Inside the Cathedral, his priests weren’t bent over their tables, working diligently at drawings and painting of the latest Candidate.
weren't? o.o; I think you meant were. ^^;
Only choice
Will you come back?
Why should I?
You're missing a Full Stop after choice and those latter two lines are missing their italics.
“You’re awfully pretty to be a priest,” the man said instead, steel blue eyes flashing in amusement
*dies laughing* Go Ivan!!!
Though I guess I don’t really know what make a good priest.
make = makes
“Oh, yes, they will kill you slowly – and they’ll let you watch while they eat you.”
*____* More awesome points for the girls... And to Dym for the very matter-of-fact way he informs them... *snicker*
As one, every last man jerked his head up or around, and all cowered at the look of blazing fury on the Queen’s face.
........... you are an evil, EVIL woman.... :P
And like woah troll. o.o; Just.... shoot it before it breeds. x.x; Dym or Raz should set it on fire. *nod* ... >.> ... preferrably just before jumping each other and making up for lost time. *nod nod* ^.^v
¬ ¬ And now I am going to hurl things at you in fury that there's no more and I get no happy fluffy makings-out before bedtime. ;_; Rargh. Is it Tuesday yet? ;;_;;
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Date: 2006-08-24 09:36 am (UTC)he was, not hew as ;)
... o.o Woah, hello mermaid plot points...
but he definitely see there was something in the clouds.
could definitely see or definitely saw
Ivan nodded, barely hearing as his men began to talk.. He looked at Shio and Shinju
Double periods
“Why did I have to wind up with a lover who’s so obviously important?” Ivan sighed
AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! ^.^ Poor Ivan.
The same thing that had happened before, backing in the inn.
backing = back
Shinju and Shio laughed, the sound cold and chilling, as they were dragged away. When a guard moved to backhand them into silence, he faltered and finally lowered his hand. The sisters’ laughter ceased only when they were well away from Zholty’s office.
*.* Those two are So. Freaking. Cool. *.*
Perhaps with the prophecy fulfilled, Pozhar will being to move out of
being = begin
Inside the Cathedral, his priests weren’t bent over their tables, working diligently at drawings and painting of the latest Candidate.
weren't? o.o; I think you meant were. ^^;
Only choice
Will you come back?
Why should I?
You're missing a Full Stop after choice and those latter two lines are missing their italics.
“You’re awfully pretty to be a priest,” the man said instead, steel blue eyes flashing in amusement
*dies laughing* Go Ivan!!!
Though I guess I don’t really know what make a good priest.
make = makes
“Oh, yes, they will kill you slowly – and they’ll let you watch while they eat you.”
*____* More awesome points for the girls... And to Dym for the very matter-of-fact way he informs them... *snicker*
As one, every last man jerked his head up or around, and all cowered at the look of blazing fury on the Queen’s face.
........... you are an evil, EVIL woman.... :P
And like woah troll. o.o; Just.... shoot it before it breeds. x.x; Dym or Raz should set it on fire. *nod* ... >.> ... preferrably just before jumping each other and making up for lost time. *nod nod* ^.^v
¬ ¬ And now I am going to hurl things at you in fury that there's no more and I get no happy fluffy makings-out before bedtime. ;_; Rargh. Is it Tuesday yet? ;;_;;