Date: 2007-05-06 12:25 am (UTC)
I loved the build-up and the pining in this story. The 'oops' moment in Kundou that Karp went along with made it more real - I always have trouble with "I've only ever chased girls before but now I'm hot for him and that is great" - but you had Karp fretting about his sudden change of direction and being confused which makes much more sense to me. And poor Andre being the fat kid and never letting himself eat any sweets now he isn't fat anymore. I wish I had his will power! And was that fishing trip with Lord Black Kitty the one that got him all wet and molested when he got home? Stories for all the band would be lovely but you really must sort Pyotr out first, you can't leave him languishing in the cold!
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