oh, bookhabit
May. 9th, 2008 11:05 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
maderrthy wank is greater than even LJ:
You called this the prologue. Seems a little long for a prologue thesedays. I'm getting used to your style now, though it still feels alittle over-cooked. I do like the attention you pay to your characters.Very vivid.
and my new favorite:
I was so bored I couldn't get past the tenth line, no offence, haha,but her book is number one, seems to me this competition, as with theconservative New Zealand exclusive literary scene is not based upon thetalent or the quality of the writing, rather how many friends you haveand how many contacts you can rely upon. Oh oh oh.
Too long for a prologue? There's rules on prologue length now?
And I'm not even wasting my time on the second comment.
You called this the prologue. Seems a little long for a prologue thesedays. I'm getting used to your style now, though it still feels alittle over-cooked. I do like the attention you pay to your characters.Very vivid.
and my new favorite:
I was so bored I couldn't get past the tenth line, no offence, haha,but her book is number one, seems to me this competition, as with theconservative New Zealand exclusive literary scene is not based upon thetalent or the quality of the writing, rather how many friends you haveand how many contacts you can rely upon. Oh oh oh.
Too long for a prologue? There's rules on prologue length now?
And I'm not even wasting my time on the second comment.
