The saddest part of all of this is that I can alll too easily see writing more about these two, even though I *really* wanted this to be a short story. Blah.
Any advice welcome, as I've never done sci-fi before and I'm sure this is riddled with holes the size of star-cruisers. Mergh, just wait until I try to write the mind-fuck story I've stolen from
rykaine.
Back on topic; I had to html link b/c of the rather odd beginning of the story. LJ wouldn't let me arrange it properly.
So go and be frightened here.
Any advice welcome, as I've never done sci-fi before and I'm sure this is riddled with holes the size of star-cruisers. Mergh, just wait until I try to write the mind-fuck story I've stolen from
Back on topic; I had to html link b/c of the rather odd beginning of the story. LJ wouldn't let me arrange it properly.
So go and be frightened here.