God*&#$ #*@&ing Pizza!

( rant rant rant )

I have a slight treat for some of you - I don't generally post rough drafts, but I'm really frustrated with this latest chapter and could use any input any one is willing to offer. I can't write children to save my life. As a sidenote, I unwittingly seem to have stolen this chapter's opening scene from my friend amasugiru. I don't think it's entirely the same - different enough that I can do it, but still, I feel really bad. I thought it up on my own, but it parallel's her story so much it's depressing. But I can't change it - this scene is very important so far as a certain character is concerned. I can't change it w/out rewriting large chunks of the story. ramble ramble ramble. I'll shut up now.

( Treasure Chapter Five )

P.S. I've noticed several people have seperate journals for their writing. It makes me wonder - would that be better, to seperate my rantings from my stories? Or would that be more annoying? Of course, I'd have to hunt down a code, I'm too poor to afford a payed account yet.

I love to stall

Should be writing, but I had an urge for a quiz break.

( Procrastination is a good thing, really )