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To a certain someone who keeps disabling her comments *glare*
1)Yes I have a plot in my head for this, and no it really hasn't unravelled much yet has it. >_>
Slow and steady wins the race. I went "EEE!" when I saw part six was up, so you're doing something right.
2) Damn it, Shaw and Gray. Have some chemistry already. Hugh, quit nosing in on their business.
They're getting there. They're doing that weird cautious assesment while growling thing guys always do. I love them both to pieces (though I'm still not sure what exactly Shaw looks like. Maybe I was reading too fast and missed the description, which is possible since I have to stop/go read it at work). And I love Gray, even though I don't know a whole lot about him yet. He's so snarly, it's fun.
3) Characters that haven't shown up yet that I know I'm going to want to introduce? Shut the hell up already. I'll get to you when I get to you.
They never shut up. You should know that. XP
4) I'm sure this thing is as boring as mud. But! I care not, because damn it, I'm determined to at least get somewhere close to 50,000 this year.
I won't even dignify that first sentence with a response. And you're a bit behind, but you could still catch up easyif hubby tied you down to a chair
5) Yes, still hopelessly behind on the word count. I'm going to try and remedy some of that tonight since the characters seem to want to talk (despite the fact that they aren't making much sense and refuse to do what I tell them to, but still...<--I need to stop acting like they have minds of their own too, because I'm not really big on having more personalities than I already have.).
Umm...they do have minds of their own. Rather, they take over our minds. Why do you think artists and writers are all considered crazy to some degree?
Keep it up! We (politely and respectfully) demand more.
And next time enable comments, young lady *glares again for good measure*
Slow and steady wins the race. I went "EEE!" when I saw part six was up, so you're doing something right.
2) Damn it, Shaw and Gray. Have some chemistry already. Hugh, quit nosing in on their business.
They're getting there. They're doing that weird cautious assesment while growling thing guys always do. I love them both to pieces (though I'm still not sure what exactly Shaw looks like. Maybe I was reading too fast and missed the description, which is possible since I have to stop/go read it at work). And I love Gray, even though I don't know a whole lot about him yet. He's so snarly, it's fun.
3) Characters that haven't shown up yet that I know I'm going to want to introduce? Shut the hell up already. I'll get to you when I get to you.
They never shut up. You should know that. XP
4) I'm sure this thing is as boring as mud. But! I care not, because damn it, I'm determined to at least get somewhere close to 50,000 this year.
I won't even dignify that first sentence with a response. And you're a bit behind, but you could still catch up easy
5) Yes, still hopelessly behind on the word count. I'm going to try and remedy some of that tonight since the characters seem to want to talk (despite the fact that they aren't making much sense and refuse to do what I tell them to, but still...<--I need to stop acting like they have minds of their own too, because I'm not really big on having more personalities than I already have.).
Umm...they do have minds of their own. Rather, they take over our minds. Why do you think artists and writers are all considered crazy to some degree?
Keep it up! We (politely and respectfully) demand more.
And next time enable comments, young lady *glares again for good measure*
Eep! *turns red*
I'm having a really, really hard time trying to figure out how to describe him (nope, you didn't miss anything, I haven't described him yet. ^-^;;) since it's all from his POV. I'm going to try fix that pretty soon here...(And a long, long time from now when I attempt to edit this beast, it will get put in there sooner.) And I'm glad Gray's at least a bit likeable. I was having personality issues with him. (As in I keep thinking he needs to get one...>_>;;)
They never shut up. You should know that. XP
*laughs* But I keep hoping we're wrong!
And you're a bit behind, but you could still catch up easy
if hubby tied you down to a chair*Dr. Pepper out my nose*
And next time enable comments, young lady *glares again for good measure*
*sheepish look* Yes Ma'am! :3 *tackle glomps*
Thanks! ^-^
Re: Eep! *turns red*
*loves the Sky*
Seriously, I love the story to bits so far. Aside from the editing all of us need to do post-nano, you're golden.
And I'm glad Gray's at least a bit likeable. I was having personality issues with him.(As in I keep thinking he needs to get one).
I don't think I'd be Mr. Personality either in his situation. He's made a good impression so far, bed-ridden patients don't get to be anything else until they're relativly healthy.
But it would be funny to see Shaw give him a bath. I'd probably fall off my chair laughing while those two went through that ordeal.