story frustrations

[maderr]

So my SMP story simply refuses to cooperate. My beloved betas have helped immensely but nothing they've suggested or I've tried 'clicks' The story has come to a standstill and I'll be damned if I can figure out how to get it going again. I'm afraid the problem is in what I've already written but so far I haven't figured out what.

Story due soon, hope my penchant for fixing things last minute works soon -_-

In the meantime, trying to stay positive about work.