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And now the drabble I wrote this morning, b/c I woke up too late to work on nano but wanted to write someting:



"Why do you persist in dumping extra sugar in my tea?" Rae demaded, slamming his teacup down.

Benedict smothered a grin, knowing it would be a tactical error. A few months ago he would have said he did it just to see Rae suffer as he drank his too-sweet tea. Now, however, he had a better answer -- and it would annoy Rae a great deal more. "Because I've found you out."

Rae narrowed his eyes. "Found me out?"

"Yes, quite. Between the sugar in your tea that you have never protested until now, the chocolate you drink every evening when you wind up working late, and the cake I see you try to sneak an extra slice of -- you have a sweet tooth."

"I do not have a sweet tooth," Rae said, but Benedict could tell from the way he tensed that he'd gotten it right.

"Liar," he retorted. "Do you want me bring up the lemon candies you keep in your night stand? The honey drops I found behind the sealing wax in the middle left drawer of the desk?"

"Why were you in the desk?" Rae asked. "Never tell me you were doing work."

"Perish the thought, most beloved," Benedict said sweetly. "I was writing a letter to the perfumer in Westmore. Nor will you distract me from the matter of your sweet tooth."

Rae glared. "You are absurd."

"Why are you so set against it?" Benedict asked, leaning back in his chair in the lazy manner he knew Rae hated. "I think you should inuldge it. Sweeten that temper of yours."

Slowly Rae stood up and moved to his side of the table, bracing his foot on Benedict's chair and shoving it back, well away from the table. Then he bent over, bracing his hands on the armrests, and loomed over Benedict. "Bored this morning? Why are we mocking me?"

"Never mocking, dear heart," Benedict said, smothering a laugh as Rae glowered over the absurd petname. "I'm just confused as to why you try to hide it."

"There is nothing to hide," Rae said stiffly. "I do not have a sweet tooth."

Benedict tried not to stare, suddenly taken by the heat that flushed Rae's cheeks. Rae never blushed. Hell, he never turned red when he was furious and throwing things. It was...something he'd have to bring out more often. "So I should just throw away the bonbons Lady C gave me?"

Rae's eyes widened briefly before he could recover himself.

"They're in my room," Benedict continued. "You know, if you want them. Though if you want to know where in my room, you'll have to tell me why you try to keep that sweet tooth a secret." He waited a moment, then went in for the kill. "Lady C said they're all filled with either strawberry cream, almond paste, or sweet cherries."

"I hate you," Rae said through his teeth. "Hate you, hate you, hate you."

Benedict smirked, triumph rushing through him. Getting the best of his lover was always heady, always thrilling. "Tell me."

"Because everyone made fun of me for it in school. A true gentleman does not eat fancy sweets," Rae said, and his gaze skittered away, cheeks flushing darker.

Well, that wouldn't do. No one upset Rae except him. Benedict leaned forward and kissed him, slow and lazy, loving the way Rae sank a hand into his hair, took control, turned the kiss hard and hot in the span of a moment. "I do like the way you hate me," he said, breathing heavily.

"Arrogant," Rae muttered.

"Look who's talking. Why don't we go explore our mutual hatred and then I'll give you the bonbons."

"Your wings need to be clipped," Rae said, but didn't protest when Benedict stood up and dragged him from the office.

Date: 2006-11-05 01:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twilight-angel.livejournal.com
I think I can feel a cavity forming. But yes! The sugar in the tea! Wonderful!

Date: 2006-11-05 01:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tygati.livejournal.com
*incoherent puddle of squeeing HappyGoo* *__________________* Purr.

Love Rae's temper. Love Benedict's arrogance and how he baits Rae and then turns the tables on him. ^.^ Love when Rae claims control of the kiss. ^.^

The only thing that could possibly make it better would be Rae throwing things. Cause Rae throwing things at Benedict appears to be a minor fetish for me. ^^;; *sheepish grin*

Date: 2006-11-05 01:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eurynome-on-ice.livejournal.com
Cute. I have a sweet tooth myself so I totally understand. If this from a particular story or just a random drabble?

I did notice an error though. In the last line should it be "Your wings need to be clipped"?

Date: 2006-11-05 01:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tygati.livejournal.com
Deceived part 1 and part 2. ^_____^ Read it and be gleefully amused.

Date: 2006-11-05 03:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rykaine.livejournal.com
Surprisingly, up where we went to college, practically everyone used that structure: "This needs washed," "That needs cleaned," "Your wings need clipped."

ha, she laughed at me when I started saying it, but I haven't yet slipped it into my writing.

Or y'know, she could have just made a grammatical error. God knows it wouldn't be the first time...

Date: 2006-11-05 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

The smartass in the audience will please to be catching up on nano and not laughing at my slip up with the pennsylvania-ism.

Date: 2006-11-05 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rykaine.livejournal.com
The smartass will please to be doing as she wishes so shut the hell up and let me alone.

Date: 2006-11-05 04:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eurynome-on-ice.livejournal.com
Um, gonna take this totally wild stab in the dark and say you two are friends.

Ten minutes later: Read it. Made me smile and feel all warm and fuzzy.

Date: 2006-11-05 04:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

Even better - sisters.

Date: 2006-11-05 06:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eurynome-on-ice.livejournal.com
Nice. I wish I had a sister...sadly all I have is a girly little brother.

Date: 2006-11-05 02:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skylark97.livejournal.com
Rae is one of the few of the world who can be absolutely freaking adorable while in a complete snit. XD Benedict knows how to push every one of his buttons. Then again, given how private Rae can be, it's probably a good thing.

Poor Rae, a sweet tooth is a terrible thing to waste hide.

Also? I love the way you took that sugar in the tea prank and turned it into something more meaningful and deep. *hearts* Benedict's a keeper.

*twirls you about* You totally rock. ^___________^

Date: 2006-11-05 03:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rykaine.livejournal.com
And see, here are still more reasons I'm not getting my own writing done. You and Sky and Tygs are all too damned distracting. Stop distracting me, damnit!

But on the other hand: ^_^

It made coming home from work a lot more thrilling.

Date: 2006-11-05 03:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

^___^ Glad I helped a bit.


*cracks whip* NOW GET TO TYPING.

Date: 2006-11-05 03:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

Greedy slaver driver. Want story. *hefts whip in a threatening manner*

Date: 2006-11-05 03:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rykaine.livejournal.com
You know nothing of what it is. How do you know you want it? Or that it doesn't suck--cause it totally does?

Date: 2006-11-05 03:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

I know you. of coursse I want it. Now get the fuck of LJ and get to work and completely ignore the fact that I'm also on LJ.

Date: 2006-11-05 03:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rykaine.livejournal.com
So you also know that at this rate it'll probably never get finished. Or ever see the light of day.

Yeah, yeah. I'll go poke and peck at it some more. If I try really hard, maybe I can get teh first segment up for some to read.

Ignoring you now. ^_~

Date: 2006-11-05 04:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiyoshi-chan.livejournal.com
Hee, they are adorable. ^_^ And I love how Shir seems to have encouraged you to develop dominant-in-public-but-submissive-in-private characters. ^______________^

Date: 2006-11-05 05:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avalon13.livejournal.com
DENIAL THY NAME IS RAE. *squeeeeee* I'd give you my soul but you already own it.

Date: 2006-11-05 12:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

Hee hee *pets the pretty soul sitting on mantle* <3

Date: 2006-11-05 06:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tygati.livejournal.com
*reads a fifth? sixth? fourth time, still loves* Ahh yes, lovely lovely spitfire... *.*

Date: 2006-11-05 06:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mailechan.livejournal.com
I'm sorry you didn't get to NaNo, but I LOVE the drabble! *love, love, love*

Your wings need clipped "to be" clipped maybe?

*loves some more*

Date: 2006-11-05 06:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] charisstoma.livejournal.com
Think his wings can be clipped or whatever..both work for me.
But his halo should be polished. He thought to bring bonbons home and store them in the bedroom. OOOO bonbons and bedroom = possibilities.
And no one makes fun of his Rae but him.
*smile*

Date: 2006-11-07 01:56 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] hsavinien.livejournal.com
Rae rocks... Poor fellow, what a trial is his life! He has to deal with a mischeif like Benedict. In his bed. Wait, losing pity here...

It still stinks that he had a nasty time at school, though.

In conclusion, spiffy. I love these characters.

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