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maderrI really hate when I look forward many days to reading something as a treat and it winds up fsking sucking.
Dude, characters cannot change that drastically in the span of 33 pages. Rae does not go from throwing snits (and objects) to 'an ode to thee, my beauty...' No, no. A hundred pages later, he will still be throwing shit. At Benedict. With enthusiasm. Benedict will still be purposely driving him to it. With glee.
So, a badass pirate captain can not be crude and vulgar and something of an ass and then 30 pages later sound like he fell out of one of my fairytales. Seriously. So disappointed. I love pirate stuff. But not when they go from RAWR DRAGON to He walks in beauty like the night...
*shakes head*
Beer. Stone Rose. I've decided this story hates me. I write it only becaue I like Poison and am in love with Chaos.
Dude, characters cannot change that drastically in the span of 33 pages. Rae does not go from throwing snits (and objects) to 'an ode to thee, my beauty...' No, no. A hundred pages later, he will still be throwing shit. At Benedict. With enthusiasm. Benedict will still be purposely driving him to it. With glee.
So, a badass pirate captain can not be crude and vulgar and something of an ass and then 30 pages later sound like he fell out of one of my fairytales. Seriously. So disappointed. I love pirate stuff. But not when they go from RAWR DRAGON to He walks in beauty like the night...
*shakes head*
Beer. Stone Rose. I've decided this story hates me. I write it only becaue I like Poison and am in love with Chaos.
