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It made him feel guilty, sometimes – a lot of the time – to stare at Dym and think the things he did.

He could still remember how tiny Dym had been that first day, trembling as he clung to a gold apple, filthy and grimy, face stained with tears. Such a sweet little child, who had grown into such a fine man…

Even when he'd been only a thief, Raz recalled, he had been struck by the splendor of the High Priest. It wasn't just the man's beauty, though that was great – especially since Dym had such little interest in his own appearance, was always so humble about it – it was the intensity of his green eyes. The way pride in his position mingled with humility that he had that place…it was so many things, both obvious and not.

From a little boy and through his youth, Raz had watched him grow every step of the way…and had been so willfully ignorant of so many things.

No longer.

Which was why he felt the slightest bit guilty watching his Priest of Ashes bathe, thinking all manner of lascivious thoughts. He wanted to lick every drop of water from that fine skin, then get him wet all over again. The way Dym washed himself was a slow torture, and Raz wanted very badly to do the washing himself, rub the slick soap over those fine muscles, explore every curve, slip his fingers into hidden places and watch delicate shivers wrack Dym's body. He wanted to wash the soap carefully away, and then pull Dym flush to him, increase the fury of his touches until his priest trembled in his arms, so desperate for the release Raz would not give quite yet.

Then he would pull Dym from the bath, lay him out on a soft towel in the corner where steam billowed to entice bathers to relax a spell. Muscles tight with want, panting with need, begging with those soft noises Dym offered no one else…yes. His priest was always so eager and willing to give, to surrender…it was always a fine thing, to bring Dym to the point he softly begged.

Yes. Spread out on the floor, skin gleaming with sweat and steam, water beading once more all over that skin… It was always so hard, deciding what to taste first on his priest. The pale nipples, the flat stomach, the throat offered up so sweetly, the sharp hipbones. He loved to drive his priest mad, to make him forget completely that self-imposed formality Dym always used.

Nothing was headier than making Dym forget himself.

Raz smirked faintly, watching Dym bathe, wanting badly to make his priest forget himself. Yes…spread him out on the floor, stroke every line of his body, make him ache with longing…then swallow that fine cock, taste the bitter need, lick and suck, feel Dym move beneath him, listen to the calm and controlled voice turn ragged and hungryy, hear his name said on a shuddering moan as Dym's pleasure spilled into his mouth.

Then Raz would kiss him slowly, luxuriating in the warmth of Dym's mouth, the lingering flavor of mint-tea, letting Dym taste himself, drugged on the touch of his priest as fingers slid over his own body, the scent of Dym and pleasure thick in the air.

Sweeter still would be spreading those thighs and sliding into the tight, welcoming heat of his lover's body, watching Dym's face as want and pleasure filled it anew, as the hands upon him faltered, that long throat bared in utter submission as Dym begged softly once more.

Mmm, yes.

He always felt slightly guilty thinking such things about this boy he'd watched grow into a man.

Not so guilty, though, that he ever resisted.

Moving silently, Raz discarded his clothing and slid into the large bath, moving toward his priest to act out each and every one of his guilty thoughts.

Date: 2007-05-26 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiyoshi-chan.livejournal.com
I adore you so so much.

Date: 2007-05-27 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com


*loves*

Date: 2007-05-26 04:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avalon13.livejournal.com
this is brilliant. The weekend leading up to my birthday is filled with pr0n. How awesome is that?

Date: 2007-05-27 12:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

I would say that is pretty damn awesome.

On that note, your story may be late x_x but I do have an idea for it.

Date: 2007-05-27 01:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avalon13.livejournal.com
you are beautiful and I love you. <33

Date: 2007-05-26 04:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skylark97.livejournal.com
*squeals and glomps Dym*

*tackle hearts you* So, so perfect. *_________*

Date: 2007-05-27 12:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com


^__^ Thankee. I hope work was kinder to you today. <3

Date: 2007-05-26 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] broken-moons.livejournal.com
*pets Raz* Don't worry, a dirty mind is a joy forever... in your case quite literally :D
Love and glompings,
BM

Date: 2007-05-27 12:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

I'm sure he intends to take full advantage of that eternity thing

<3

Date: 2007-05-27 08:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] broken-moons.livejournal.com
I'm sure *snickers* ^__^

Date: 2007-05-26 05:13 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] alice_montrose
Oooo, Raz indulging in fantasies he plans on making real. Yummy! *purrs and paws at the bishies*

Date: 2007-05-27 12:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

It was fun writing it that way - i didn't know I was until I started typing, but it turned out rather well in the end, I like to think ^^;;

Date: 2007-05-26 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unusualmusic.livejournal.com
Yes! I've been waiting for that couple, and I *highly* appreciate this ficlet.

Date: 2007-05-26 07:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theotherdigit.livejournal.com
[laughs] Yay for dirty-minded gods! XDD

And yay for getting to see more of Raz and Dym. <333

Date: 2007-05-27 12:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com
Dirty mind ftw! \o/

^___^ I've always been fond of them, it was fun to finally play a bit more with them.

Date: 2007-05-26 08:19 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] vera-dicere.livejournal.com
awwww yay for raz and dym! they're definitely one of my favorite couples of the lost gods [though i really love them all...]

keh. i love that raz is perving on dym while he's taking a bath. it's cute! in a slightly lecherous way *snicker*

Date: 2007-05-27 12:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

^___^ Cool. I love Raz and Dym, it makes me happy others do as well.

He's turned out a very pervy bird. I bet he thinks naughty thoughts in the cathedrals too, hmmm there's a drabble for another day...

Date: 2007-05-26 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marasmine.livejournal.com
So glad Raz doesn't resist acting on all his thoughts about Dym! Mmmm. Smutty thoughts are the best sort! Thank you!

Date: 2007-05-27 12:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

Once he figured out he could perv and act on that perving, he certainly was more than willing to get on with it ^^;

Thankee!

Date: 2007-05-26 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mechante-fille.livejournal.com
Oh, that's awesome!!!! I love that the whole fic is Raz dreaming and planning. And that he gets Dym to lose that crazy formality. *vigorous nodding*

Date: 2007-05-27 12:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

It was hella fun to write it that way, I don't know why.

Yes, Dym is rather silly with his formality, but he adores his birdie.

Date: 2007-05-26 11:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arithonrose.livejournal.com
lovely...again very evocative...I like that this one is from the perspective of Raz thinking about what he wants to do to his priest

very yummy...thank you

Date: 2007-05-27 12:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

Thankee ^^

It was odd to write from such a strange tense, but lots of fun.

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2007-05-27 12:35 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] zeffy-amethyst.livejournal.com
I thought I'd comment when I've read it all so here I am. I can't find the words to express how beautifully written the are. And that's an oxymoron because by having said that, I did express how much I liked them.

I really loved the Shah/Nanda. The loyalty and devotion the two have for each other is palpable throughout the entire story. But Lucid/Baxter/Elton has a soft spot in my heart, but that's mainly because I'm on an OT3 kick.

Thank you for the lovely ficlets. You own this icon.

Date: 2007-05-27 12:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com


Awww, I'm happy you like so much ^^

I'm glad I managed to get all the pairings correct ^^;; I always worry, jumping around as I do.

And such a lovely icon it is

<<333

Date: 2007-05-27 12:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] graphitesmudges.livejournal.com
>< You just hit my sensitive spot, guilt and overwhelming want.

Raz's name made me giggle. ^ ^

Date: 2007-05-27 12:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

Bullseye! Mwahaha! ^___^

It makes me giggle, especially when I try to say it around my poor sister who can actually say it correctly while I make russians everywhere cry in pain ^^;;;;

Date: 2007-05-27 01:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ruselkie.livejournal.com
dude, i third/fourth/whateverith the props on the tense/'fantasy' angle. very clever.

and can i note just how much i love this pair? especially in light of the whole 'who's the top' thing tygati was doing-- this pair just contrasts themselves and each other so well-- raz so informal, dym formal, dym really old, except raz is both kinda older and younger, raz being smaller but more agressive, and so forth.
love 'em.

and more! yay!

Date: 2007-05-27 03:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynnette-lacy.livejournal.com
Magnificent! That is so in character! I love it, his passion and desire, even though he knows he shouldn't feel that way. Hee hee, you can't resist love...

Date: 2007-05-27 10:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aqua-eyes.livejournal.com
*__________________________*

Date: 2007-05-27 02:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] koneikaa66.livejournal.com
I like it. It was good, original and well written. Thank you!

Date: 2007-05-28 12:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sporkess.livejournal.com
This was an interesting take... but I really liked it! The whole tone of it, all warm and sensual, and the way each new paragraph seems to follow on so neatly from the thoughts of the one before... And it even addressed some of the issues I have with pairings like this, basically "Isn't it weird that you raised him from a child and now you sleep together?" and somehow made it work with the rest of it.

Wow, so much love for this little bit!

Date: 2007-05-29 02:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jladi.livejournal.com
Wow... and that was just Raz imagining it. *grin*

Date: 2007-05-29 02:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jladi.livejournal.com
Love the icon too, btw~

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