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Good grief, why can't my muses always be this cooperative? *kicks them all. in the balls.*



There were times Formane wondered at himself.

Growing up on Kreska, he'd been embarrassed when he'd happen to see a couple kissing in the park.

He'd been mortified beyond all reckoning when he'd walked in on his roommate getting hot and heavy with his girlfriend.

In college, he'd been too shy, too pathetic, too brow-beaten, to make the moves on Lius he'd so badly wanted. So many nights he'd shamefully jerked himself off fantasizing about what he wished he actually had the nerve to do to the half-hellcat.

After his screw up, after he realized he'd just lost the only thing that mattered – Formane somehow managed to find his spine and lose his inhibitions.

If someone had told him back in the academy that he would someday shove his lover into a dark alleyway and up against the wall, then drop to his knees to suck his hellcat off hard and fast while people passed by barely a dozen steps away…

He would have called them insane, and walked around red-faced the entire day.

If someone had said he would do it not infrequently, that he would become rather fond of sucking and fucking his lover in barely-secluded places, he would have died of mortification.

Claws sank deeply into his shoulders, Lius always forgetting to be careful when they got into it, yowling loudly enough there would be no doubt in the mind of any passerby just what exactly was going on in the alleyway beside the bar. He thought he heard someone pause, linger, but didn't care enough to stop what he was doing to see for certain.

He sucked harder, feeling blood trickle down his shoulders, felt the faintest brush of a lashing tail, gripped Lius's hips as he bucked sharply, crying out as his release poured hot and heavy down Formane's throat.

Swallowing it all down, licking away all traces, Formane then stood and kissed Lius hard, loving the way Lius gave it all right back, knowing how much it affected Lius to taste himself in Formane's mouth. Though he'd just come, Lius was far from sated.

It made Formane so hard he hurt.

A hand pressed against the bulge in his pants, Lius nibbling at his lips, licking the blood from one shoulder. "What do you want from me, Kreskan?" Lius wrapped his arms tightly around Formane's neck, kissed him hard. "Want me here? Back on the ship?" Another kiss. "Up against the wall?" Lius licked his own lips, eyes gleaming with hunger. "On my knees?" He jerked his hips, making Formane groan at the contact. "On all fours?"

"Yes," Formane growled, determined not to have to pick just one. The night was young.

Sometimes he wondered at himself, but mostly he wondered why it had taken him so damned long.

Not that it really mattered. They were more than making up for lost time.

Date: 2007-05-26 05:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiyoshi-chan.livejournal.com
Are you TRYING to make my brains run out from my ears? :P I obviously need a brain-melty icon, if you intend to do this regularly.

Date: 2007-05-26 05:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

Wasn't trying, but I can live with that result, certainly ^____^

Date: 2007-05-26 05:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lokiloo.livejournal.com
Jesus-Allah-Buddah! You'd think that with results like these, you'd be writing smut all the time! X3

Do000000d, SO happy you took the challenge. <3

Date: 2007-05-27 12:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

I think my brain would rot.

^__^

Date: 2007-05-27 08:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avalon13.livejournal.com
AHAHAHAHAHA You spelled 'Buddha' wrong! But I can't really blame you

Date: 2007-05-26 05:17 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] alice_montrose
*laughs at Formane being such a silly boy when he grew up*

Hmm... sex in public. That's always an interesting one. *nod nod*

Date: 2007-05-27 12:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

I think they're the only yay! public! couple I have, which makes them fun.

And yes, formane was quite quite silly.


^___^

Date: 2007-05-26 05:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] broken-moons.livejournal.com
Guh. Brain-melt indeed. This is so hot it's ridiculous, almost. Because I didn't think today could get any hotter *fans self* *______*

Date: 2007-05-27 12:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

I am happy I can contribute to the hotness of the day ^__^ You have been doing quite splendidly yourself <3

Date: 2007-05-27 08:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] broken-moons.livejournal.com
^__^ Thank you!

Date: 2007-05-26 06:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unusualmusic.livejournal.com
Are you sure that your muses will tolerate being kicked in the balls? I mean, if they are rebellious already, don't you think they might be a tiny bit revenge-minded after that sort of treatment? Just saying... In the meantime, I find it rather amusing that all my lj writer friends' smut scenes are way hotter that the gay sex videos that I 'stumbled' across recently...(dont ask).

Date: 2007-05-26 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

Muses require constant beatings and rough treatment or they get even more out of line. they're in too much pain to rebel, right now *glares for good measure*

Ahahaha ^^;; *doesn't ask*

Date: 2007-05-26 06:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theotherdigit.livejournal.com
[brain-melty] *¬*

Date: 2007-05-27 12:23 am (UTC)

Date: 2007-05-26 08:21 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] vera-dicere.livejournal.com
guh. they're always hot together. just...hot.

and i like the note about the footsteps that paused...i mean, in that situation, who wouldn't want to be a bit of a voyeur??

Date: 2007-05-27 12:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

^___^ I love writing these two and their naughty ways.

I would certainly be tempted to play the voyeur, I'm not gonna lie.

Date: 2007-05-26 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mechante-fille.livejournal.com
GUH! That was so so so good!! I love the build up from prude little boy, and Lius's unknowing role in changing that. And how much more of a turn-on shock it is for him to like public sex now.

Yum.

Date: 2007-05-27 12:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

The boy is certain all or nothing. Hide or exhibition, no halfway at all ^^;;

Thankee.

Date: 2007-05-26 10:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marasmine.livejournal.com
*Offers wonderful muses ice-packs and sympathy in return for more smut. The weekend is young yet*

Oooh, so nearly two blow-jobs in one story! Yay! Dark alleys seem like such good places now...

Date: 2007-05-27 12:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

Heh. Don't be too nice to them. I pick on them, they get revenge by forcing more stories upon me. I'm sure if they existed outside my head, all parties would be in prison by this point.

Certianly more fun than the alley ways full of mugging and murder and all.

Date: 2007-05-27 12:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] graphitesmudges.livejournal.com
Your icon always makes me melt, but combined with hot hellcat and shameless Kreskan? *totally lost*

Date: 2007-05-27 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ruselkie.livejournal.com
...whoa. fetish. cool. i mean, hawt.
i love how he's like, 'one? no way, we gots lotsa time!' (but in better english)

the smut is melting my brain, yet i want more. more! yay!

Date: 2007-05-27 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynnette-lacy.livejournal.com
This is so great. I love it when Lius gives Formane options and he wants them all!

Date: 2007-05-27 04:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arithonrose.livejournal.com
I missed this one earlier...and GAH.....I think I like tails...mmmm kinky......very nice, thank you

oh and maybe we can con the muses into believing that every week is a B/J Drabble Fest so that they behave.....*grins*

Date: 2007-05-27 08:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avalon13.livejournal.com
*pets* Silly Formane. Of course you'd choose boinking the hellcat over unimportant matters. Like universal Peace.

Date: 2007-05-27 10:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aqua-eyes.livejournal.com
*_____________________________________________________________*

Date: 2007-05-27 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skylark97.livejournal.com
*brains dribble out my ears*

*______________________*!! I love his reflections on losing his inhibitions. XD Proof that all it takes is the right partner and the right incentive.

And almost public smexing! *drools*

*______________________________*!!

Date: 2007-05-27 03:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] koneikaa66.livejournal.com
Like with Tygati's, the more I go from one BJthon story to another, the more I find them even better. Thank you. I hope_ no I'm sure_ it will go on. Thanks again for the good stories you provide to us!

Date: 2007-05-28 12:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sporkess.livejournal.com
At this point I just have to comment with incredulous admiration on your ability to change the tone of your writing with such annoying ease, giving each one of these little competition pieces an entirely different atmosphere.

Lius and Formane are rather cool. It's rather good that Formane got over his shyness; they work so well as a brash couple.

<3

Date: 2007-05-29 02:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jladi.livejournal.com
What a change! *fans self* from slow and sensual to fast and furious ^_______^

Date: 2008-02-20 03:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valore.livejournal.com
*brings out the fan though it's still technically winter and snow outside*

I'm melting, I'm melting!

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