BJ Marathon #5 - Deyllgo/Cion
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maderrAnd after this, am taking break. I feel kinda silly have written five in one day when I thought I'd write three all weekend >_>;;;
Um. If you've suggestions for more, please do feel free to give ^^;;;
Deyllgo swam toward shore with long, easy strokes, not even the weight of his wet hair enough to slow him.
He hit shallow waters and then stopped – where was his Cion? He had been sleeping…
Water splashed him from the left and Deyllgo whirled even as he realized who it was, nostrils flaring at the smell of his lover mingled with the sea.
Cion laughed and splashed him again. "Deyllgo. Did you enjoy your swim?"
"Yes, Cion," Deyllgo replied, less interested in discussing his swim than in the look in Cion's eyes, the growing heat as his small human looked at him. Those eyes lingered on his hair, his chest, and Cion's cheeks turned pink as those eyes dipped lower still before skittering away as Cion moved into slightly deeper waters.
Growling low, liking this turn of events – especially when they were home, where other dragons might come upon them, which always upset his Cion – Deyllgo moved forward and snatched him up.
Cion yelped, always startled when Deyllgo so easily scooped him up, but immediately melted into Deyllgo's kiss, fingers tangling in the long, dark hair, and his small human made Most Pleased sounds.
Yes, Deyllgo liked those sounds. He wanted more of them, but could not get them with his hands full. Giving another rumbling growl, he moved them to where surf met sand, liking the way the water continued to splash against his small human, the way it made him jump and shiver every time.
Mmm, yes. His Cion looked right with the ocean. Rumbling his satisfaction, Deyllgo set to tasting the sea on his lover's skin, bathing Cion with sensation, liking the mewls and cries that got, the way Cion's hands scrambled futilely at the wet sand before moving back to tangle in Deyllgo's hair, grip his shoulders.
Cion moved against him, begging wordlessly, jumping as the surf splashed them yet again. "Deyllgo!"
"Yes, Cion," Deyllgo said, long tongue flicking out to lavish attention upon Cion's cock, working from base to tip, teasing his balls, the junction where thigh met groin, tasting everything, the musk of his lover constantly bathed by the sea.
When Cion bucked in his arms, crying out roughly, Deyllgo finally ceased to torment, taking Cion's cock in his mouth, sucking hard at it, long tongue working to increase the sensation, driving Cion mad, his small human pulling at Deyllgo's hair, writhing beneath him, feeding him those Sounds.
Deyllgo growled low around the cock in his mouth, and it was all Cion needed, his hips snapping sharply as he came. Swallowing it all down easily, Deyllgo slowly worked his way back up his Cion's small, pretty body, finally reaching his mouth, kissing him long and slow. "Cion…"
"Deyllgo," Cion said with a smile, petting him lazily. "I like swimming with you."
Oh. That was Good. Deyllgo felt warm, to hear such words from his small human. He didn't know why, but it pleased him,
Rumbling low and soft, he pressed soft, nuzzling kisses across Cion's skin.
"Mmm," Cion murmured, mouth sliding over his. "You're still needing, dragon." He lifted his legs slightly and spread them, cradling Deyllgo between them. "And I am aching for you."
Growling, Deyllgo immediately moved to comply, moving them out of the water. This was a much happier Cion than the one he'd first rescued. "My Cion," he said.
"Yes," Cion said, baring himself to Deyllgo's attentions, fingers once more tangling in his hair. "Always."
Yes. Always. As if anyone could ever compare to him. Cion would never want or need anyone else, and Deyllgo bent eagerly to the task of ensuring it.
Um. If you've suggestions for more, please do feel free to give ^^;;;
Deyllgo swam toward shore with long, easy strokes, not even the weight of his wet hair enough to slow him.
He hit shallow waters and then stopped – where was his Cion? He had been sleeping…
Water splashed him from the left and Deyllgo whirled even as he realized who it was, nostrils flaring at the smell of his lover mingled with the sea.
Cion laughed and splashed him again. "Deyllgo. Did you enjoy your swim?"
"Yes, Cion," Deyllgo replied, less interested in discussing his swim than in the look in Cion's eyes, the growing heat as his small human looked at him. Those eyes lingered on his hair, his chest, and Cion's cheeks turned pink as those eyes dipped lower still before skittering away as Cion moved into slightly deeper waters.
Growling low, liking this turn of events – especially when they were home, where other dragons might come upon them, which always upset his Cion – Deyllgo moved forward and snatched him up.
Cion yelped, always startled when Deyllgo so easily scooped him up, but immediately melted into Deyllgo's kiss, fingers tangling in the long, dark hair, and his small human made Most Pleased sounds.
Yes, Deyllgo liked those sounds. He wanted more of them, but could not get them with his hands full. Giving another rumbling growl, he moved them to where surf met sand, liking the way the water continued to splash against his small human, the way it made him jump and shiver every time.
Mmm, yes. His Cion looked right with the ocean. Rumbling his satisfaction, Deyllgo set to tasting the sea on his lover's skin, bathing Cion with sensation, liking the mewls and cries that got, the way Cion's hands scrambled futilely at the wet sand before moving back to tangle in Deyllgo's hair, grip his shoulders.
Cion moved against him, begging wordlessly, jumping as the surf splashed them yet again. "Deyllgo!"
"Yes, Cion," Deyllgo said, long tongue flicking out to lavish attention upon Cion's cock, working from base to tip, teasing his balls, the junction where thigh met groin, tasting everything, the musk of his lover constantly bathed by the sea.
When Cion bucked in his arms, crying out roughly, Deyllgo finally ceased to torment, taking Cion's cock in his mouth, sucking hard at it, long tongue working to increase the sensation, driving Cion mad, his small human pulling at Deyllgo's hair, writhing beneath him, feeding him those Sounds.
Deyllgo growled low around the cock in his mouth, and it was all Cion needed, his hips snapping sharply as he came. Swallowing it all down easily, Deyllgo slowly worked his way back up his Cion's small, pretty body, finally reaching his mouth, kissing him long and slow. "Cion…"
"Deyllgo," Cion said with a smile, petting him lazily. "I like swimming with you."
Oh. That was Good. Deyllgo felt warm, to hear such words from his small human. He didn't know why, but it pleased him,
Rumbling low and soft, he pressed soft, nuzzling kisses across Cion's skin.
"Mmm," Cion murmured, mouth sliding over his. "You're still needing, dragon." He lifted his legs slightly and spread them, cradling Deyllgo between them. "And I am aching for you."
Growling, Deyllgo immediately moved to comply, moving them out of the water. This was a much happier Cion than the one he'd first rescued. "My Cion," he said.
"Yes," Cion said, baring himself to Deyllgo's attentions, fingers once more tangling in his hair. "Always."
Yes. Always. As if anyone could ever compare to him. Cion would never want or need anyone else, and Deyllgo bent eagerly to the task of ensuring it.
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Date: 2007-05-26 08:46 pm (UTC)brain melted. sooo HAWT.
but not enough to beg for more. Jewels or Dragons? Pretty please?? *blinks eyelashes furiously*
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Date: 2007-05-26 08:55 pm (UTC)By the way, you said suggestion? Jason and Calvin, "come makes my gum taste funny" *giggles*
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Date: 2007-05-26 09:09 pm (UTC)O_O
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*dies*
So so hot and cute! Thank you! It sure made my day. ^^ Oh, I'm a bad lurker and feel bad for suggesting but... Jewels? Brightleaf? Doug&Zach? *goes of to re-read and repeat the first reaction* xD
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Date: 2007-05-26 09:12 pm (UTC)[yeah, I just read them all five in a row; my brain needs to reconsitute]
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Date: 2007-05-26 09:20 pm (UTC)Sorry. I'll be more coherent later. Maybe.
Something from the dragon sidestories to Dance with the Devil? Or something from Dance with the Devil? Maybe Sable/Chris?
*adores all you stories*
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Date: 2007-05-26 09:28 pm (UTC)...
Wait, I'm pretty sure the word I'm going for is GUH. We'll go with that.
(The pretty, hot dragon-small-human-love (ON THE BEACH!!!XD), it kills me dead. =3)
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Date: 2007-05-26 09:39 pm (UTC)^.^
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Date: 2007-05-26 09:40 pm (UTC)And yay for happier Cion, and having sex in the open. Good for him, and for Deyllgo. *nods*
And five? FIVE!!! I always knew you were amazing. My hat is off to you!
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Date: 2007-05-26 09:41 pm (UTC)General bj comments :>
Date: 2007-05-26 10:22 pm (UTC)After reading all five smutlets back to back I love how all the relationships are depicted differently - the first two of Nanda & Shah, Raz & Dym were sweet and gentle and kinda cute, but I found the last three hotter. It was cool to look at them and see that Luis & Formane was (I felt) I-hurt-you-accidentally-cause-I'm-caught-up-in-the-moment, while Deiter & Beraht was I-hurt-you-to-show-the-world-(and-you)-that-your're-mine and Deyllgo & Cion was just You-are-mine.
Why yes I DID put way too much thought into analysing your bj fics :) - and of course the muses were cooperative - they got smex!!!
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Date: 2007-05-26 11:14 pm (UTC)I was a little worried about Dragons giving blow jobs - all those Very Sharp Teeth make me nervous. But that was so very hot and wet that the teeth didn't really matter after all. So beautifully done!
I noticed the muses trying to get their own back -writing beneath him - I think writing was the furthest thing from Cion's mind at the time! :)
Enjoy your rest - tomorrow is another day!
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Date: 2007-05-26 11:15 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-05-27 12:04 am (UTC)*laugh* I've yet to meet a reader who is so content they stop asking for more. I would be sad if they did ^_~
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Date: 2007-05-27 12:05 am (UTC)Eh. Only a couple of them are longer than two pages, and just barely. the rest are barely over one ^^;;;
Hmm. Will ponder.
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Date: 2007-05-27 12:06 am (UTC)Hee. there is no such thing as a bad lurker. Jewels I did. Hmm...Doug and Zach might be fun.
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Date: 2007-05-27 12:06 am (UTC)Lol. Might try pacing? hee hee <<333
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Date: 2007-05-27 12:07 am (UTC)*lavishes with affection* Mmm, more dragons. I could live with that.
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Date: 2007-05-27 12:08 am (UTC)I'm not sure smut deserves sparkling and coheren ^^;;; I like the reactions I'm getting <<333
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Date: 2007-05-27 12:10 am (UTC)^________^
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Date: 2007-05-27 12:11 am (UTC)He is ridiculous amounts of fun to write. I'm so verra verra happy Tygati let me steal him. It was way too generous of her ^^;;;
Eh. I think the first five don't even total ten pages ^^;;
Re: General bj comments :>
Date: 2007-05-27 12:12 am (UTC)Heh. That's actually really good to hear ^__^ I was worried that with the bj theme, I'd start getting redundant and repetitive. And you summmarize the pairings so beautifully <3
And I will not tell Dey you said that ^_~
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Date: 2007-05-27 12:17 am (UTC)Oh, gods, they are so easy to pick up. I catch myself doing it with other stories ^^;;
Aha, I know. I always have to make certain to remember claws and teeth ^^;; It was really funny when I wrote the first bit of smut for these two -- I'd forgotten they had long claws, and realized I'd have to either do something else entirely or hope I could write rimming ^^;; It was kinda funny watching me spazz. I'm such a freakin' idiot at time.
Ahaahhaha. I'm going to yell at my beta for missing that ^_~ It very likely was very very far from Cion's mind, hee hee.
Thankee for reading!
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Date: 2007-05-27 01:02 am (UTC)[As if anyone could ever compare to him. Cion would never want or need anyone else, and Deyllgo bent eagerly to the task of ensuring it.] = XD Deyllgo so amusing.
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Date: 2007-05-27 02:07 am (UTC)(not like i actually know, but i've heard things...)
who-hoo! all favorites officially covered, but there's still mooooore...
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Date: 2007-05-27 02:45 am (UTC)I love these two...very yummy...(you'll notice that there are few if any of your characters that I do not love ...*grins*) *fangirlingmadlyhere*
can I point out a small typo..."his small human pulling at Deyllgo's hair, writing beneath him, feeding him those Sounds"...writing should be writhing, yes?....*grins*
oh I am having a lovely time...thank you.....and I saw someone else request Jewels and Dragons.....can I second that request?...please...thank you
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Date: 2007-05-27 03:04 am (UTC)Just your TMI moment for the day. ^^v
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Date: 2007-05-27 03:15 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-05-27 03:49 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-05-27 04:12 am (UTC)I am having SUCH a good day. I got a rec letter from my university I was waiting for, and my favorite baseball team won, so my Saturday was already going well. And then I log onto LJ, and there is tons of smut!
Thank you for the effort you put into writing!
:)
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Date: 2007-05-27 05:37 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2007-05-27 07:11 am (UTC)Although the thought of sand in uncomfortable places makes me wince. :P
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Date: 2007-05-27 08:15 am (UTC)As for requests, Tobias/Prince Ian? Or maybe something of the mysterious St.Ives? *feeds your muses*
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Date: 2007-05-27 09:14 am (UTC)I adore this line :D
Cion is adjusting well to having a dragon for a lover, isn't he? Yum!
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Date: 2007-05-27 10:45 am (UTC)Yes, I'm reinstalling the printer software mum >.>;
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Date: 2007-05-27 11:57 am (UTC)*LAUGH*
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Date: 2007-05-27 12:03 pm (UTC)I wonder if Mikey realizes much of his sex life is public knowledge.
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Date: 2007-05-27 01:13 pm (UTC)"My Cion," he said.
"Yes," Cion said, baring himself to Deyllgo's attentions, fingers once more tangling in his hair. "Always."
*hearts* Warm fuzzies and hotness. It doesn't get much better than that. *tackle glomps*
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Date: 2007-05-27 01:17 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-05-27 03:14 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-05-27 05:43 pm (UTC)... that, and he was reading over my shoulder when I did this one. ^^;
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Date: 2007-05-27 05:46 pm (UTC)*laugh*
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Date: 2007-05-28 01:12 pm (UTC)I'd say more, but you've written so much that I'm running out of interesting/relevant comments! So I will echo other other reviewers in saying, very hot and cute, and then I will move on.
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