Updates!

[maderr]

I just got my work schedule for this week (they start over on Tuesdays). I have ONE day off, and I'm only a "part time" worker. Lord save me from ever working full time at this place...

In other news, I've finally updated my website. Added the two chapters of Rainbow that were still missing from there, as well as Chapters two and three of Treasure. That chapter just came out of no where the other night.

Almost done with a couple of other stories - if my murderous work schedule doesn't kill me, I'll have them up on Saturday.

Oh yeah - I forgot to tell everyone this: Armageddon is upon us. Last night, not two seconds after I took an order and hung up, the man called back and apologized for being rude. So prepare ye for the End.

Comments

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The switch from them talking to each other into getting into the killing of the twin ritual seems a little random though. Are there personal reasons for why Nankyo reacts as much as he does? I mean, as a royal, it makes sense that he'd feel some sense of responsiblity, but it seems like there should be a more personal reason for why he feels so strongly about it, because Taka's reaction is a lot calmer than his. Gyah, I'm not making sense the way I want to.

Hmmm...I meant to make it more clear as to why the ritual would bother him. It's a very important part of th story - Taka doesn't have a personal connection, that's why he's so much calmer. I'll see if I can fix that part, it gave me hell anyway.

Nankyo isn't a character who's about to explain himself to anyone.

Man, he's so hard to write. I can't ever let him just explain things b/c it's not what he would do, so I either have to work around it or leave it a mystery. But he's so much fun too, argh.

I'm glad you like so far - your comment help me a great deal, I can't even express it.