story frustrations

[maderr]

So my SMP story simply refuses to cooperate. My beloved betas have helped immensely but nothing they've suggested or I've tried 'clicks' The story has come to a standstill and I'll be damned if I can figure out how to get it going again. I'm afraid the problem is in what I've already written but so far I haven't figured out what.

Story due soon, hope my penchant for fixing things last minute works soon -_-

In the meantime, trying to stay positive about work.

Comments

[kiyoshi-chan.livejournal.com]

Hmm. Do you want to try tossing ideas back and forth? (the way we do for most of your other pieces?) Or do you have a vague idea of how you want it to go?